Crusty-Wiwuh's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Peter's day]

ok

you need to use a higher framerate. that animation was way too choppy. decent graphics tho.

[Chav invasion]

nice

pretty good, nice idea. though some of the drawings werent as good as others and the animation was sloppy in places. Plus the voice acting wasnt all that great but I know voice acting is hard. I think with practice you could make something amazing.

Insaneplanetman responds:

thanks

[O.o.t. nutshell Trailer]

ok

you need to make it slower paced, so you can take that bit where it looks at the sky for ages out. make it more balanced so that there is an equal amount happening at all times, and not really fast bits in places and then arkward pauses in others. I'm looking forward to seeing the finished movie.

[Anime arcadia shorts#1]

make something longer

that was great. submit some longer stuff. it will go down well here if its all of that quality.

[tekken5-movie]

needs a preloader

thats some very cool stuff, although I couldnt use that website because I cant speak french or german :(. A Flash file needs a preloader though.

[The FBF Club]

cool

thats was decent. you could definately work on the graphics though. make them look more proffesional by adding more detail. and if you really have to use stickmen make sure they are well proportioned and look good.

Jovatov responds:

Thanks, i'll try to make the graphics better next time, but with fbf, detail is really hard and takes a really long time...

[Dodge!]

meh

kinda short. mebbe make a load if lil clips like that and put them into one file. and i dont understand what happened at the end, did he blow himslef up or what?

[Dog School]

great

I think the only improvement you could make would be to improve the sound quality. the sacrifice in filesize would be well worth it.

[Red Prism: Kaine Stories]

too much slomo

thats stuff would be alot better if it was faster and had sound affects. in places it was slomo just when he was walking or something. slomo is only good in crazy action parts. use it sparingly. there were some cheesy tweens in there too, like whn it zoomed into the camera the camera was smooth but the room was zooming like a slideshow. and shape tweens look crap if they are used badly. those are my criticisms. decent flash nonetheless.

ExcaliberX1 responds:

thank you for all the advice for the sequel. Any1 reading this, plz rate me on the story and how kewl the character Kaine is or something. This is my first flash. Noobie mistakes like that are going to happen, no way around that. Rate me on everything story, graphics, animations, how well the music fits to the movie, like this guy.

[Sprites Tournament]

great

there was some bad grammer, and some of the flash drawings and tweens werent so great, and sometimes it was hard to tell what was going on. other than that it was a really great movie. I loved it.

Cranium-Soul responds:

thx for the review