Crusty-Wiwuh's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Yoshi's Isle-Bitch]

uh

your movie has been stolen dood. unless munkey882001 or wingedcoconut is an alt acount of yours you might wanna check underdog of the week- yoshi is a bitch

[The Intruder]

ha

that was decent but you should have used a higher framerate. and the box with the hole in didn't fit the stage. I can't see why people are so afraid to overlap the stage slightly, it's not like you can see anything off stage in flash player.

[Metal Slaughter]

that was poor

the sprites didn't go onto the background, people were running on walls and things. the animation was poor, like the grenade went very slow, then very fast. this is not origional and quite boring. the sound was also poor. they screamed like women, and all in exactly the same way??? annoying explosion sounds that were too slow and bad quality. it wasn't smooth and fluid enough.

Chemotherapy responds:

o_o Thanks man for all the "constructive" critism x) Just kidding. Glad you wasted a small percentage of your anger upon it ;)

[Wanna Be A Skater?]

pfft

the graphics werent all that bad but the animation was abit crappy. the lip sincing was good but you need to colour in everyones teeth so theyr not skin colour. the looping skating stick sucked, it was too fast and it was a dumb loop. make sure movement of people is beleivable, like at the end the narators arm comes out of his hip. keep trying.

[Daily2oon09082005]

argh

you submit one of these every day and the menu and intro is good but all the stuff in them is usually crap, I mean most of the time theres one that is vaguely worth watching but there wasnt in this one, this is the worst dailytoon I've seen so far.

[Lords of the Pie!]

awesome

that's how stick movies should be :D I think the sound could have been optimised a bit better to cut the filesize for those with slow connections... (not me)

[pointless happenings]

lol

it's awesome! keep practicing. I think you needed to put some kind of preloader in for those who are too blind to see the 'transferring data from...' at the bottom of the window. maybe some of the sound could have been optimised more to bring down the filesize a little. learn how to use motion guides. some of the animation was a little inconsistent in speed but that will improve with practice. also in buttons you need to put a shape in the 'hit' frame. what you put in 'hit' is basicly the collision bounderies. do lots of tutorials!

[Red Bull]

lol

nice. shame no sound though, you could have got a beep for the heart rate monitor thingy and maybe some wind for the flying bit, or the guy could have been humming... very funny and nice graphics. full colour would have looked better but it would have spoiled the spoof, so the only thing that was missing was sound.

Renegade-Hamster responds:

I agree. Thanks for a thoughtful review.

[I hate fuken emos]

uh...

pretty lazy animation, the sound needed to be optimised better. I dunno wtf happened at the end, he got shot or something? it wasn't very clear, partly because there was no sound effects. I can see you think emos are dumb because theyr always complaining even though theyr really well off and stuff but this kinda sucked. one of the rules of submiting is not to submit hateful entries but meh. most people do emo cartoons not because theyr depressed themselves, but because they want to convey emotion in their movie in an artistic way, and sadness is a poweful emotion that all of us can relate to in some way. there are some that think theyr depressed and think being emo is cool and stuff but not everyone is like that. I know many people who are very happy but they dress up like emos and listen to emo music. those are the kind of people who make emo movies. use smoother animation and practice drawing.

theJboy responds:

Well thx for the positive feed back but do you know where I can get better sound effects coz all I hade was my friends monitor mic and a tissue box sooo… since my mouth cant make the sound of a meteor hitting an emo I decided that was the next best thing well thank you for the response.

[Reservoirclock: Pissed]

nice

you needed to optimise the sound on the end credits better to cut filesize. fun movie though.

ReservoirClock responds:

sorry i rushed the ending.