Crusty-Wiwuh's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Go Ska!]

ha

not bad. The music was decent, I mean I'm no ska fan but that was barable. didn't quite understand what was going on, like, ska v punk or something... kinda weird. the animation was tween based and nothing impressive but there was nothing wrong with it. keep it up i guess.

[London Underground experi]

ugh

nothing impressive. I liked the loading screen type thing but you made some really bad spelling and grammar mistakes. I mean I'm bad at spelling but that was pretty disgraceful. Try typing up the text into a word processor and doing spellcheck, then copy it into flash. and it was kinda boring how it was just a picture of some doors. and the bouncing underground sign on the text was badly done, sometimes it just slid along the screen instead of bouncing like it should. This looks pretty lazily done and it's nothing very interesting. the sound is well optimised and it's not hugely noobish but it's just boring.

[Why War?]

needs sound

and a preloader.

[Chav man remake]

argh

that was really badly animated. I much prefer the origional.

[Duct Tape]

cool animation

it was full of bugs though, bits of animation stayed on the screen for long periods of time. it really needed more sound, either consistent music or sound effects. music is easier and looks good with this kind of animation. at points it was hard to see what was going on, try using thinner lines in some places. You are pretty good at animating and drawing though.

[FRAN the little goth girl]

awesome

that was great, definately make a series! I noticed the doll kinda disapears from the floor in one bit, and the fire turns with the girl when it should still be burning upwards, also the text at the begining went a bit too fast. just spend a bit more time going over your movies seeing what could be improved before submiting them. I can't wait to see a series of this!

poisonkiss responds:

cool, thanks! yeah it is abit flawed BUT things do and will improve! thanks again

[hell-machine]

cool

some of the animation was too slow, and you need to boost the framerate a bit, specialy if ur gonna be doing fast past action, awesome action looks crap at a low framerate. can't wait to see the rest of it!

[Xionic Revolution]

all good

amazing, maybe using thinner lines would make the graphics look better, I dunno. btw PS means post script so the second one is post post script or PPS, not PS2 :p also he pulled the wrong bit off the grenade in the against fate teaser, with nades you pull out the pin which makes the lever flick out, not pull off the lever, the pin is a lil wire hoop like on a fire extinguisher. keep up the quality animation!

Xionico responds:

XDD sorry, i like to use thick lines, jsut say thanks to god i dont use size 10.
and about the p.p.s er...woops XDD
and about the grenade, a friend told me abotu that, but iw as too lazy to change it lmao

[Forever In Your Dreams]

argh

that was really badly animated. the girl was the only well drawn thing in it, it was a touching story but the animation didn't do it justice. it was full of bad shape tweens, the voice was sucky too.