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Nah

This stuff does look cool, but it's easy to do and theres way too much of it on NG already. I voted 0.

Terrible.

I would liken the animation to that of someone who has never animated anything before in their life. You have a terrible concept of movement and aesthetics.

Really look at this and compare it to good stick movies you've seen, then tell yourself what you're doing wrong. You have to learn to look at your movies as if you didn't make them.

A few main points animation-wise:
The figures at no point moved their legs;
They always moved at the same speed;
It didn't look at all like they were part of the backdrop;
Thick wobbly "movement lines" behind them looked bad.

The graphics were awful, the music sucked (personal opinion), and the concept/plot was boring and meaningless. I appreciate that you worked hard on this but if anything you need more practice.

Lost-Wisdom responds:

Damn dude, you gotta chill you critic. =)

Perhaps for the alphas section

I'm pretty sure trailers are against the rules.

Regardless, I have low hopes for your RPG. The movie kinda well made but I would have rather not watched it at all really.

Akitta responds:

Then don't torture yourself with it...I'm not going to force anyone to play it, and by far I'm the only on working on it...once I get more persons...well...who knows...

I laughed

I didn't expect that. An amusing touch and a well made movie.

Two things I noticed:
Firstly, the frame by frame when she is opening the envelope wasn't particularly well done. If the framerate is high, it might be worth only animating every other frame. This usually isn't very noticeable and makes frame by frame easier. Just try to be neater really.

Secondly, I think you overused the blur filter. Try just adding more detail to your backgrounds so you don't have to overuse filters to make them look better. Maybe use bitmap masks to give texture to object.

Todd-Studios responds:

I made this when I first got Flash 8, so I overused the blur filter, cause it use to not be an option.

Kinda like how you play with the toys you get on christmas morning, more than the older ones. :P

zomgzorz

dis flsh is da best i lyk it coz its gt lots of fings in it wot are good its well funny lol

Pretty terrible

I liked the part where the duck thing came out of the guy's mouth and bit the other guy. The drawings were okay and it was well put together but other than that it was boring and stupid.

OH GOD SHAPE TWEENS

You definitely have a good grip on cinematics and movement, however I feel that you could spend some more time cleaning up the animation to make it look a bit more presentable. Although your techniques are resourceful and effective, I could clearly pick each one of them out, and allot of the time how it could have been made better.

Also, the sound was at such a low bitrate I think it spoiled it somewhat. A larger filesize would have been well worth the increased quality.

All in all I think you have the potential to do great things, but you need practice if anything. Spend more time on what you do.

Not that great

I can't really see why this ever got to number 1; it's relatively well put together sure, but throwing a bunch of references together really isn't my idea of good humor. I've certainly seen more impressive sprite work. The fight scene's were just about ok-ish, but not exactly cool to watch or anything. The voice acting wasn't bad for a flash movie, but not particularly good alot of the time. It also dragged on longer than it should have.

A slightly novel concept but all in all a pretty dumb movie in my opinion.

Pretty standard

Not bad, not great. Not great gfx, okay animation, fairly unfunny humor.

stop(); in action panel to make movie stop. Actually, just get the NG preloader.

I'de save it, barely.

I lolled

This was very funny and I love you're style. You animate very well.

I would say try adding more small details to your graphics, such as bitmap texture masking and alpha gradients for lighting effects:- the graphics were well draw and nice to look at, but didn't really have allot of depth to them.

I look forward to seeing more from you in the future.

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