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pretty lazy animation, the sound needed to be optimised better. I dunno wtf happened at the end, he got shot or something? it wasn't very clear, partly because there was no sound effects. I can see you think emos are dumb because theyr always complaining even though theyr really well off and stuff but this kinda sucked. one of the rules of submiting is not to submit hateful entries but meh. most people do emo cartoons not because theyr depressed themselves, but because they want to convey emotion in their movie in an artistic way, and sadness is a poweful emotion that all of us can relate to in some way. there are some that think theyr depressed and think being emo is cool and stuff but not everyone is like that. I know many people who are very happy but they dress up like emos and listen to emo music. those are the kind of people who make emo movies. use smoother animation and practice drawing.