Clock Day Time Trial 2005 lmao
that was one of the best first movies Ive ever seen. Keep up that good work!
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The-Shadow-2 responds:
Thank you. I'm happy with it, but the window size of the movie & the background didn't come out correctly. So I've got some things I need to fix still.
O My Brothers wow
best clockday animation ever. seriously, front page material... You're amazing!
LeekClock responds:
Quite a compliment! Thank you sir.
WEFE hmm...
not bad for a first. you need to compress the sound though. find a tutorial that shows you how to optimise sound. then find lot's of tutorials that teach you how to make a good flash. keep practicing.
Hugoku responds:
Thanks. I found them, but it's already too late, since my FLA file was lost...
If/When I release my next FLash, I'll be sure to have used some tutorials at least ^^
hmmm
if this was any day exept for clockday that would be blammed with a score of 0.0000. poor, poor newgrounds... *empathy* :'(
magicpizza responds:
wtf
argh
can none of you clocks optimise sound? use stream and compress sound when exporting. Happy clockday nyway.
Haxor-Clock responds:
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<TITLE> No HTML, hey? </TITLE>
Sorry, but I literally made this in 2 minutes. Happy clock DAy to you 2!
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X Teaser cool
cool, I havn't watched any other of your cartoons but i noticed in this one there was a bad use of tweening. try using a higher FPS and when a 3d object turns around don't just tween it all the way round, put a few frames in the middle where you can see the side you couldn't before so that it looks 3d. just try harder with the animation. make it smoother and more impressive.
Uptown-SlimJim responds:
I've always used 12 Frames per second in my toons but I'm planning to boost that to 20 in the finale. And maybe you should watch the other toons...you might notice a pattern with the way I do turning and tweens
nice
pretty good, nice idea. though some of the drawings werent as good as others and the animation was sloppy in places. Plus the voice acting wasnt all that great but I know voice acting is hard. I think with practice you could make something amazing.
Insaneplanetman responds:
thanks
The FBF Club cool
thats was decent. you could definately work on the graphics though. make them look more proffesional by adding more detail. and if you really have to use stickmen make sure they are well proportioned and look good.
Jovatov responds:
Thanks, i'll try to make the graphics better next time, but with fbf, detail is really hard and takes a really long time...
Red Prism: Kaine Stories too much slomo
thats stuff would be alot better if it was faster and had sound affects. in places it was slomo just when he was walking or something. slomo is only good in crazy action parts. use it sparingly. there were some cheesy tweens in there too, like whn it zoomed into the camera the camera was smooth but the room was zooming like a slideshow. and shape tweens look crap if they are used badly. those are my criticisms. decent flash nonetheless.
ExcaliberX1 responds:
thank you for all the advice for the sequel. Any1 reading this, plz rate me on the story and how kewl the character Kaine is or something. This is my first flash. Noobie mistakes like that are going to happen, no way around that. Rate me on everything story, graphics, animations, how well the music fits to the movie, like this guy.
Sprites Tournament great
there was some bad grammer, and some of the flash drawings and tweens werent so great, and sometimes it was hard to tell what was going on. other than that it was a really great movie. I loved it.
Cranium-Soul responds:
thx for the review
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